Reviews for Etaine Avery

I was so happy to see another book in this series. Woo boo. It didn’t disappoint

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My favorite book thus far. Carlos is super hot. Both guys are alpha to the bone. I love how they come into the hardware store and take over. Etaine is a great author. Please keep them coming

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I really, really liked this book!!

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First time reading this author. The story idea was good but the execution was off for me. There were too many holes in the story that were never filled. The biggest one was Keira herself. She was kidnapped and rescued by Malcom & Heath. They took her to their ranch to recover and then she just....stayed there. True, she had no family and no friends (convenient) but she also had a job, I assume an apartment, clothes, a tiny bit od money at least, etc., etc. Yet NONE of this was ever addressed by the author. Did the girl not have bills that she left behind or belongings? Also, after her rescue, NO ONE asked her any questions. No interrogation, NOTHING. These guys were SEAL'sbut didn't do a background check on her or Bradley...it was ridiculious! It took a week for the men to figure out Bradley's role in the plot which just made them all look foolish. As for the psychic angle, I didn't mind it, but it wasn't adequately explained. Perhaps it was all explained in Book 1? Why did Heath's entire team amd sister have different psychic abilities? Where did it come from? Even Keira had precognitive dreams--also not explained. I could go on and on but you get the gist. I was eager to read this book based on the excerpt but was ultimat,eu disappointed. I think the author has promise, but needs to work on fleshing out story and characters more.

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