Reviews for Melanie (MFMMM)

Loved, loved, loved this book.

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A very good book

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This book was good but not over the top outstanding, in my opinion. Melanie is a nursing working a night shift for the 7th day in a row. As an incoming call comes in her team is attacked and she is the only one left alive. Hunter is enforce for the mountain lion pride and is the first to arrive at the hospital to see if the rouge lion is there. Also to see if the shift secret is out or not. He catches his mate blood scent and his protectiveness comes out. He notifies his other brothers, Finn (alpha), Cooper (Beta) and Dane (fellow Enforcer) about finding their mate. As all alpha mates act they take Melanie to their house to take care of her. I do understand that she is all alone but she doesn't even put up a fight. She just goes with them. Then they explain to her what they are and how she is to them. She then tries to run away because she thinks they only want sex. ***Spoiler Alert***** She is a virgin and she automatically lumps them into a group of shitty guys. Of course she mates them. Gets kidnapped again and beaten to shit and almost raped but Cooper stops it. They remate her and she gets pregnant. What I like and think is a pro is that the author put in a Epilogue in the book. But I was disappointed to not find out about how many babies she has or the gender. I believe it takes place a couple of months after she gets better and starts up baking. Its a good read.

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Great story. Look forward to more from this author. Seems like the start of a good series.

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The author definitely has promise. The story was good but needed to be fleshed out more.....it was a little too "by the numbers". There was a lot of telling, but not enough feeling, if that makes sense. I didn't fully connect with the characters, particularly Melanie. For example, what is her backstory, why has she she been emotionally hurt in the past? Why is she so easily accepting of these men? I know it's because of the mating bond, but it's such an easy, quick way out. Surely anyone would be somewhat conflicted? Her whole life has turned upside down and I wanted more from her point of view. Anyway, I am intrigued by this author and would consider reading more from her, particularly if this becomes part of a series.

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I came upon this author another author and I liked the sound of this book when reading the description as I love shifter and menage stories! I loved the storyline and the characters but there were errors, eg. grammar errors, wrong names, some parts were rushed and others parts seemed too unbelievable! But saying all that It wasn't all bad and I did really enjoy reading it and I will read other stories by this author!

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a very well written book. I hope this author writes another soon.

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Once I got past the use of Australian terminology for things in an American setting the book was good. An operating room was referred to as a theatre, and a living room,as a lounge is only a small example.

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