Reviews for The Teacher's Pets (MFM)

I have only gave this book 3 stars because the editing is not good... The story is great but the author needs to make sure the book is edited... A few examples .... Her eyes are green in one sentence and then in the next chapter they are brown... She stay Friday night with the guys and goes home on Saturday because she has to get ready for school the next day, on Sunday?... At first she doesn't drink coffee and then in the next chapter Wesson is pouring a cup of coffee....... Brenda calls her boyfriend Steve thought his name was Tommy. I think either the editor, proofreaders or beta readers should have got these. It kinda takes away from the story.. Come Siren get better editors.

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