Reviews for The Trouble with Holly (MFM)

I really, really liked Book 1 (Foul Play) of this series and decided to pick up this installment. Unfortunately, I was really, REALLY disappointed. Holly started over in Merrick after ending a bad relationship. She is a total klutz, which, you'd think would be sort of cute but it was most definitely NOT. She wasn't just klutzy, she was a walking DISASTER. I think one of the me. Even called her that! By her own admission, she had multiple car wrecks, numerous broken bones, one of which occurred in this story, she trips and falls all over the place.... Honestly it was so over the top it was annoying that she came across as so dumb and/or helpless. Then she did really stupid things like driving off into storms b/c she didn't hear from the men (hello, ever heard of cell phones??). UGH I could not get into her character al all. Then there were Chase & Jarrod. They are supposedly big time Doms at the local BDSM club yet lived with their parents. The author explained the reasoning which I got, but really? It just seemed so unnecessary and unromantic to have have their potential girlfriend living with them and their parents. What a turn off! Finally, the ending/danger---totally thrown in at the last minute. Overall, I feel like this was written more as a comedy than a sexy, dramatic or suspenseful read. I do not want my erotic romance novel to be a comedy. The ONLY saving grace? The glimpse of the new hot, gay doctor in town. He was interesting and hopefully he gets a book of his own---preferably a serious one.

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Really awesome book!!!

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A good book

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The third book in Merricks, Montana is fantastic!!! Holly is a stereotypical full figured woman who has spent her life dealing with demeaning comments and ridicule because of her curvy figure; so after the ultimate betrayal be her ex, a move to Merricks seemed the logical thing to do. So when Holly meets the Walker brothers early on, she knows she is not the woman for them and that they are just being friendly, even though they consume her every dream and waking thought. After two long years of walking on eggshells and giving her space to protect her shattered spirit, Chase and Jarrod Walker have decided the time has come to claim what is theirs, and Holly is about to discover that drop-dead gorgeous men love a whole lotta woman. But no one ever said that a relationship was meant to be easy, and when it comes to these two dominant brothers and their luscious blonde bombshell, it will certainly never be dull!! Welcome to Merricks, Montana, where ménage is the norm and love and lust are definitely in the air!!!

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The story didn't flow. At first she is told to take her (harsh) punishment or go home & she's like ok - what? What happened to her self doubts etc

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