Reviews for Torn Between Two Brothers (MFM)

Normally--I love to read a Jan Bowles novel. This one was just difficult for me to read. It read more like a first draft, rather than a polished novel.

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Jan Bowles is an automatic buy for me. I was a little disappointed with this book, though. It wasn't the story line that disappointed me as much as the editing. Suddenly, in the middle of chapter 4 it was italicized and remained that way for the rest of the book. It took me out of the story because earlier in the book, there were italics for the thoughts of the characters, so it almost seemed like the rest of the book was supposed to be in someone's thoughts, but since the story went on normally, that was not the case. There is also much attention paid to the fact that the brothers are fraternal twins, then later in the book there is a line about them being from the same egg. By definition, fraternal twins happen when two separate eggs are fertilized. For some reason, this error really bothered me. Like I said, Jan Bowles is an automatic buy for me, and the above won't change that!

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REad it today and just loved it.

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