Reviews by Sharon A

Great story, and this series is a must-buy for me. Having said that, I have to say there are some errors that came close to taking me out of the story. For example, the part that was worst for me was when one hero gives the other a necklace. In the book, it is a "neckless". The necklace sits against his scarred chest, but in the book, it is a "scared" chest. Maybe a read through by an editor could fix these errors for future downloads. I still gave the book 4 stars and I will buy future books in this series!

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Jan Bowles is an automatic buy for me. I was a little disappointed with this book, though. It wasn't the story line that disappointed me as much as the editing. Suddenly, in the middle of chapter 4 it was italicized and remained that way for the rest of the book. It took me out of the story because earlier in the book, there were italics for the thoughts of the characters, so it almost seemed like the rest of the book was supposed to be in someone's thoughts, but since the story went on normally, that was not the case. There is also much attention paid to the fact that the brothers are fraternal twins, then later in the book there is a line about them being from the same egg. By definition, fraternal twins happen when two separate eggs are fertilized. For some reason, this error really bothered me. Like I said, Jan Bowles is an automatic buy for me, and the above won't change that!

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I loved this book and the whole series. Hawk and Raven are sweethearts. I look forward to the next book. The books in this series are great books, but somewhat short. They are perfect if you don't have the time or the energy to expend reading a really long book, yet still expect to get involved with the characters and cheer for their HEA. Sometimes I am ready to just read a story in the evening, and this whole series is perfect for that.

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I love her writing! I became so wrapped up in this story and in the characters that I found tears running down my face at a couple of times. I have not read a book from this author yet where I looked forward to the end.

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