Reviews by Avid

Awesome! The writing and story line were so intense and both danced together beautifully. All of the characters were great. John, Del and Sara were a perfect match and the tone of the love story and circumstances flowed very well. I will look forward to reading more hot stories by Marcy Largo.

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Really good. I wish it had been longer but it was a very good story. I hope the rest of the brothers find their mates.

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I would have rated this higher rating if the story had been edited and proofed well. There were some disjointed transitions from one area to the other. The conflict was rushed way to much and resolutions were cut short. I know it is a short story but it needs to develope at a good pace. Otherwise I loved the story line and the relationship because it is a continuation of another story about sisters.

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Love it! Especially when she turns the gun on the coniving little witch that tries to take what is not hers. Edie is a little slow on the uptake on what type of woman that is, but she more than makes up for it in the end. Personally, I would have just given her a good old fashioned butt kicking.. no weapons needed except feet and hands. I liked the fact that it didn't turn into the classic girl cat fight.

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I liked it. Not a big fan of touching people before you know who they are but it does happen I guess. It is okay to be a tomboy and a lady when the times call for it.

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I really liked that story was more about love and friendship and helping one another in a time of crisis. I liked the moments that built up to this joining. It was refreshing to get to know these characters and their friendship before jumping into the sexual aspects. Ms. Blake did a great job in bringing out the difficulties involved in a non traditional relationship working in the everyday world. It was a pleasant surprise for her not to hide from her love for both men. It is a noble thought that we could all amke the decision to stand strong in the face of such a tough choice. The depiction of the tragedy of a firestorm and the community feel of family made this story better than most of the menage stories I have read as of late. There was genuine caring and friendship involved. They took the time to care and protect her and themselves by using condoms. So many times it is not even brought up because of the auquiredness of talking about protection from STD's as well as pregnancy. I am glad that there was a light at the end of the dark tunnel, having one small structure left untouched by the firestorm that engulfed a whole community. Hope is never lost as long as love is still standing in all of its many capacities. Fire is a wonderful story that touches the heart in more ways than one. It has the potential to be expanded further as their lives continue to grow and the reality of a child with two fathers and the choices that entails later for the child and possible other children. Good job!

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Loved it! The writing and story telling were fantastic. If we could all be that open and accepting of differences and get straight to the love.

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I liked the entire story, especially here waiting o have sex with the man she loves. The ending was a total let down. Some of these short stories need to be developed into longer ones with the same intense detail. The problem or misunderstandings get blown out of porportion and solved way too easily. I would have liked to see more and even see where Tate and Shay ended up. This story would have gotten a 4 if it wasn't for the abrupt ending.

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I liked the story but it went too fast. I would have liked to see alittle more development in their characters and maybe a little more depth. I believe in love at first sight, but even then there is more to the story.

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Nice story line and a bit of rogueness to it. I am not sure I like the thought of strangers giving in to baser needs. It makes for a great fantasy.

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I really like this book a lot. It was very hot a sultry. I like that even though it is an alternative lifestyle, love was a primary focus for all of it. I do not like stories where love is not the ultimate goal and focus regardless of a traditional one man one woman relationship to a menage or more. The love scenes were definitley thrilling and the image the words painted made me very hot. The love is the real turn on. The difficulty of a menage is still in the forefront of their minds even as they continue to choose a shring lifestyle. The writing was fabulous with a few errors, but none the less a great read. I really enjoyed every minute of the story.

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I just recently wrote the review for the wrong book. This book was all over the place. Conflicts were resolved too quickly. I know this is fiction but it used real possibilities for the premise of the story. The story line was a great idea; the telling of the story was not. I would have liked it to be a bit longer and have a better resolution with the Hobbs brothers. It seemed too pat and deflating. I am not saying I wanted anything bad to happen, but the ending of that part of the story was too abrupt. the grammatical errors are unexceptable in a published work. They should have been caught during a final proof reading. The book I incorrectly reviewed I have not even read yet. I will do that now and see if I can fix it.

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This is not my favorite book by Jenny Penn. I have read the short version of this novella and liked its ending much better. I am enjoying the cattlemans series very much. I am looking forward to the next installment. What a trip it would be to really find that kind of passion and have it work. I don't knoe how well I would deal with alpha males; I would consider myself to be an alpha female with suto compromising tendencies.

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I liked it but wish it would have been longer and more in depth.

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I really liked how this book did not just jump into the happily ever after. I enjoyed the conflict and resolution. I did not like the somewhat abrupt end after so much care was taken with the thought process of the female character to accept what her heart already knew.

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